Promo Video rough cut

Junction Promo B rough from cmdiploma on Vimeo.

This is the rough cut of our promo video that me, Sam and Ash made.

with the video we wanted to start the promo with a good live performance as it would catch the viewers attention. We then based the promo around a live performance music video, as people enjoy seeing a good live performance and they may imagine them doing it or think they could do it better. we then started to put in question but we relised to late that the junction asked us to use there font to make it more professional. also the questions were placed in the wrong places to appear when they shouldn't after the first section that is all Operation FM the promo picks up passe and mixes through most of the band. so we feel that a big improvement is to reduce the opening scene and jump in to the mash up sooner also improve witht he interviews as some of the sound levels were off and some you couldn't hear very well. also the scrolling information was to fast and unreadable also there a blank bit at the end before the last shot were we didn't have enough time to put in any footage.

so the main improvments we feel we need is to change the text keep consistantsy witht he speed of the promo from the word go. and make sure all the text and information that is needed is in the right place and is easy to read.