Bournmouth Feedback

when going to bournmouth we got feedback and help from a MA students to see whats good and how to improve. When they sat us down to give us our feedback we were quite suprised what they had to say. After seeing our promo they felt that it was very poorly made. it wasn't quick enough and it asked alot of question but didn't awnser much. The tittle were a good idea but didn't seem to work. It seemed random then structured. after taking this beating of costructive critisim

they then told us how we could go about improving showing us technices and ideas to be able to make our video look more structure and alot more sleek and cool

looking back at this its was well needed feedback and I feel I as an editor has matured and seen the bigger picture ive now started to notice more error and what a good shot and what not. I now know its best to think about each shot your going to use and only use the bit you want and not put in bad footage just for the hell of it as its a waste of time and just pointless.