feedback of rough cut

Feedback from Simon the Client

-Live footage of The Fiver
-What the requirements are for getting in
-What you get if your band is accepted
-How to apply
-It must look contemporary

-Appealing to the 14 – 17 age group
-Supply all the relevant information

-Good use of the bands, drops me straight into the evening
-Does not show entry requirements
-Mentions financial incentives but not the opportunities of working on large stage with sound and techs - would be great to include this in the final cut
-Left me slightly confused
-Looks modern
-Great editing and speed
-Yes but does not include too much of the younger band(s)
-Unsure the ticker tape is clear enough, moves too quickly, unclear

this is helpful as our client seem to like the consept and idea of the promo so we can go back to the promo and tighten up the editing and finish putting all the information and awnsering all the question also to make sure it simple for the veiwer to understand how to apply


Feedback from class mates
-text effect great Idea but think about using a diffrent font maybe
-Maybe more footage of what the bands throught of there expirence
-Overall quite good and effective but needs a 'WOW'factor

from this we dono how to put in much more of a 'WOW' factor as ouir idea for the wow factor is the editing and the footage of the band do a good performance.